Sherlock BBC Prompting Meme

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Prompting: Part XVIII
Giggles at the Palace
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Sherlock steals hearts.

(Anonymous)
He practically doesn't have one of his own, so he steals them for a while then gives them back after a while so the person keeps living.

John gives him his heart after figuring it out. Sherlock, never having had someone give him one before, gives it back at night when he's sleeping only for John to give it back in the morning.

The thing about shared hearts is they keep growing bigger...

Re: Sherlock steals hearts.

(Anonymous)
I have some hearts for this prompt: <3 <3 <3 <3 <3

seconded!

Yeah, yeah -- ripped from a Pink Floyd song

"Sherlock tries, but misunderstands
He's often inclined to borrow somebody's heart till tomorrow!"

I don't know what that accomplished, but now every time I listen to "See Emily Play", I'll think of Sherlock.

Re: Sherlock steals hearts.

(Anonymous)
Oh god, this prompt is magnificent! Just a question: would you prefer this to take an angsty turn or a "happy ending for everyone" turn?

OP here: Re: Sherlock steals hearts.

(Anonymous)
Was leaning towards HEA, but it could so many different ways... Both? Either? Multiple fills are welcome. Who am I to stanch a writer's creative leanings? (because OP totally can't make up their mind either)

OP will love you for any fill OP gets.

I can say I can see two different things that I don't think actually helps... one way, a heart replicates itself or resurrects itself with enough TLC, and another way, if a shared heart that hasn't divided into a set yet, if one of the sharers die or are heartbroken about something, it's a very very bad thing...

Re: OP here: Re: Sherlock steals hearts.

(Anonymous)
AYRT

... Mycroft is that you?! Are you scanning my head with super-advanced-CCTV-x-ray-vision or something? Because those two different things you suggested were exactly what I had in mind for both the HEA and the angsty fill! XD

Alright, consider me a potential filler: this prompt is just too delicious to pass! I'll try to come up with something different from your two suggestions so that you get a surprise, hopefully I'll succeed... otherwise I'll pick one of the two ;)

Re: Sherlock steals hearts.

(Anonymous)
Oh god I want to fill this and I'm leaving the day after tomorrow and I have to pack and ngggg...

I might spin something out of this tonight, OP.

Re: Sherlock steals hearts.

(Anonymous)
Thank you! Have a good trip!

fill: anywhere i go you go (1/3)

(Anonymous)
i don't even know, this is weird. warnings for slight (consensual) vore at the end — though it might be more metaphorical than literal at this point, idk.




The first time Sherlock finds John's heart, it is two in the morning. It is on the kitchen table, abandoned as though John has left it there with his cuppa, left it there for a second while he went to fetch sugar for his tea, forgot it behind. John has gone to bed for three hours, creature of habits. Sherlock picks it up, cradles it in his hand: it is beating faintly, steadily, honestly.

He's careful with it that night. He keeps it very close, close enough to touch, but he never does touch it — John is sleeping upstairs without his heart in his chest, which is fantastic. But he never touches it; it's early. It's too early to touch, he decides, looking at the strange red thing, copper-brown and delicately beating, on the table next to his laptop.

He wonders if John'll say a word about it, come morning.





Molly's is bird-like, light, and very soft; it doesn't sustain the journey well, and Sherlock must return it within two days, Molly falling upon it with a gasp, a panicked look of misunderstanding relief. He takes it again, twice. It isn't manipulation if you always give it back.

He never takes Mycroft's. He takes Lestrade's. He takes Sally's, and he enjoys it with slick, sick fascination. At uni he would keep jars, branch them out carefully, connect them together until he had a network, sixteen hearts linked together and beating. It was a magnificent friendship. Sherlock gave them back, and they never noticed.

"I fucking love you," Victor Trevor said ten days after they'd met, and Sherlock fair panicked — gave it back, take it back. You don't want it, he said, his voice rough with abruptness, when Victor demanded his in exchange.

He never took Victor's again.





John found out like this, six weeks ago:

The latest stake-out evolved into an insane race, rooftops and streetlights and rattling staircases, Sherlock's longer legs carrying him faster, further, than did John's — and when John caught up around the corner of the avenue, panting, grinning, his thigh unflinching and his shoulder thrown back and straight, Sherlock looked under the leather jacket. They'd missed their cue, let their quarry escape; it was a boy, twenty, barely, just a boy who'd killed a man. Hardly worth the brainwork — hardly worth this:

John's heart was contracting and expanding inside his chest, under the leather jacket. It shook, fast, beating the blood into his arteries, pounding a rapid, arrhythmic cadence. It was very red. It looked as though it'd drum its way out of John chest, and that was a temptation Sherlock didn't resist: he pushed his hand under the jacket, against the side of John's blue jumper, pushed it in. John's heart thudded fast against his palm.

"Okay," John said, very steady and very breathless, wide-eyed. He pressed his palm to the back of Sherlock's, so that Sherlock was trapped between John's heart and John's pulse; they thrummed in tandem, enclosing him in. It was delicious. He could taste it all the way up to his tongue.

John said, "It's alright," and touched his cold nose to the warm side Sherlock's neck.





John takes to leaving his heart about. It is not convenient. It is bothersome, and ridiculous, and every morning Sherlock will find it on the countertop after John's gone, very red. John cares. He makes honest mistakes.

Sherlock holds his heart in his hand, and. Oh, he thinks, breathless. I didn't think it went this fast.





They barter John's heart for months, sharing it, back and forth, with cups of tea and laptops and Chinese takeaway. John watches telly with socked feet curled up on the sofa. His ribcage is perfectly balanced, perfectly average; Sherlock has counted the twenty-four ribs, the cartilages, the vertebrae. He has drawn comparisons, written charts against the fridge at night, only for John to look disgusted in the morning and throw them all away.

"If you're so interested in the way my heart works, you might as well use it," he advices, matter-of-factly, putting on a fresh jumper in the morning. "Whose thumb is this, and what is it doing in the honey jar?"

fill: anywhere i go you go (2/3)

(Anonymous)
Sherlock knows how hearts work. He has memorized the average heartbeat rhythm; he can dissect a human heart in thirty seconds flat, lay it bare and open for John to see. He won't, though. John likes his heart. It's a good heart, red and fist-like and clenched tight, pounding steadily. It loves well.

It makes its place in Sherlock's chest, purring loudly, very warm. Sherlock rubs his palm against it sometimes — it sits strangely there, too big and too hot for his body.





"You are completely bonkers," John tells him, affectionately. "You're a bloody fucking madman. You idiot," he says, his hand over the back of Sherlock's neck, very heavy and very warm. Sherlock, head bent over his microscope, stops breathing altogether.

"This is gorgeous," John says, meaning the chart, meaning the map, meaning the diagram Sherlock makes in red and black pen, all four chambers flung open wide, the atria firmly carved in, the ventricles delicate and rounded.

Sherlock closes his hand over the sharp, angular bones of John's left wrist, and thinks, Of course. It's yours, after all.





They touch each other easily, gradually, and soon it is all as if they had lived here for ten years instead of ten weeks. Sherlock yearns to spread his fingertips over the flat of John's chest, touch at the soft skin of his wrist, measure the pulse in his carotid artery; and John finds the tenderness in the back of his neck, presses his thumb to it in the mornings, when he's late for work and gulping down tea and his heart is very large and very enormous in their little kitchen. Sherlock watches it become great. It's a study in time that he appreciates, a delicacy he can enjoy.

I keep you here, he thinks, looking at John's heart underneath his thin t-shirt on a Sunday afternoon. It lights up John's chest like a red glow, murmuring under the skin. You keep me.

John shakes the newspaper open and grins at him slightly over the edges of it. They sprawl contentedly on a Sunday evening, ten borrowed hearts on Sherlock's shelf, and John drinks a little tea, watches the evening news. Sherlock looks at him, never stops, and thinks, fondly, I'm never going to get over you. After. When you leave.





London is a gigantic ribcage. Sherlock taught himself to shut out the red — the hearts of London made constellations, tight thin networks interlocked. He taught himself the streets and boulevards and avenues, the map of London. He learnt the shape of the Thames, the main arteries, the passing cabs. He learnt about the gaping breach inside his chest, and how long he could survive it; he tamed his hands into stealing hearts effectively, easily, without pain. As an adolescent, he picked chests as swiftly as he picked pockets.

Astronomy and the solar system he never saw much use for, or much good. He had his own stars, red and spangled, between the streets of London.





Jim Moriarty wears a sharp, smart Westwood suit, and dusts his heart off his sleeve with a mindless gesture after John lets him go. He says, "But we both know that's not quite true," and Sherlock shuts his eyes for a moment, conscious of John's heart pounding inside his chest. It feels unmoored, brought fast against the sides of his ribcage, beating beautifully.

And later, when Sherlock tears the bomb off John's chest and shoulders, mouthing mindless frantic pleading, he forces it back inside of John's ribcage, hard enough that it will stay. John's legs buckle under the weight of it, the sudden rapid — loud — beating drumming startlingly close to his wounded shoulder.

"Glad no one saw that," he mutters, as Sherlock paces, his brain on fire, his chest throbbing where John's heart no longer is. Which means: normal people don't share hearts. But John cracks a stupid joke, and Sherlock laughs shakily, watching John's pulse murmur against the side of his throat.

Then there are flimsy red laser dots scattering about John's chest. John's heart jumps into his mouth, and it stains the insides of Sherlock's eyelids red, that last look. He aims a gun at a bomb, and the world explodes blue.


fill: anywhere i go you go (3a/3)

(Anonymous)
The days after Moriarty are long, swamped in the stark gold of summer. Sherlock draws all the blinds down and curls on the couch like a child, ignoring John's attempts at tea or talking or sharing back his heart — every time he looks at it inside John's chest, something warm and liquid happens in his own. John's alive, though a bit burnt around the edges, his right hand in a cast. Sherlock thinks he could live on this: on John's heart beating still, staggeringly.

John — moves around, changes clothes, makes tea, updates his blog. Sherlock is dormant, burrows himself down on the sofa sleepily; Lestrade doesn't call, and the days blur together in slanted light. It draws dusty lines into the darkened wallpaper; it outlines John's features in sharp contrast, making his eyelashes very thin and very dark against his cheeks when he blinks.

John's heart stays on the counter. John sleeps badly without it, nightmares marring his lined face in the evening, as he plucks it out with a grimace.





Summer in London is sluggish, tainted red. John wears thin frayed t-shirts and washed out jeans when he is in the flat, seeking the cool in the kitchen, against the windowpanes. The blue shirt he wears often is old, faded and very soft, carrying memories of med school, parties in pubs, early mornings after sleepless nights of cramming for an exam. It makes his face fall along different lines, smoothes over the wrinkles at the corners of his eyes and his mouth.

The heat is near unbearable, August breaking against their windows in great slamming surges. John opens them all early, shuts them when the morning is halfway through; he opens them again in the evening, when the air cracks into something cooler and bluer.

Sherlock gathers data. He observes John's movements around the kitchen, his sure, capable surgeon's hands deftly maneuvering around Sherlock's own experiments, his pipettes and microscopes. He analyses the heat, the measure of sunlight. He makes calculations for John's heart, how long it will go on, how much longer John will stay.





"Alright," John says, one afternoon, and Sherlock finds himself straddled, saddled with a lapful of ex-army surgeon, sitting heavily atop his hips and thighs. It crashes the air out of his lungs, stuns him slightly, makes his ears ring. John has been so careful. John has not touched him in a fortnight. The overwhelming casualness of this moment — John's strong legs enclosed in his old jeans and John's hands on each side of his head — upsets Sherlock's assessments, sends him reeling, sets his brain loose altogether.

"Hi," John says, a little forcefully, snapping his hips up to gather Sherlock's attention. "No losing yourself in your head, look at me. Sherlock. Yeah. Yeah, alright. This is stopping here, Sherlock, I mean this. You haven't left the flat in a month."

"I like the flat."

"I do too. It's a very nice flat. But here — Sherlock, that shelf there. It wasn't empty, six weeks ago. You were always stealing hearts to put there, and you weren't even doing anything with them at all, just borrowing, you always gave them back. Now you won't even take mine."

"I don't need it," Sherlock gasps, meaning, it'll burn in there. He said so, I won't have it, I won't have it. Something around John's eyes softens and widens, and he smooths one hand over Sherlock's throat, Sherlock's neck and jaw, the carotid artery where by all accounts there ought to be a pulse beating.

"It's too big for me now," says John.

fill: anywhere i go you go (3b/3)

(Anonymous)
Sherlock squeezes his eyes shut for a second, tightens his hands like clamps on John's thighs. John's fingers skitter upwards, touch his cheekbones, his eyebrows, the slant of his nose. "I'm not going," John says. "Push me away all you want, I'm not leaving."

"I don't want you to leave," Sherlock says.

"Good." And because John is utterly mad — insane enough to live here — he takes a bite into his own heart and pushes it into Sherlock's mouth. Flicks his tongue in, cool and red and very very wet. Sherlock swallows him in completely.

They take their time, biting and sucking and sharing morsels, teeth catching onto the other's mouth, until they each have a half, red all the way down their throats and inside their ribcages. John sprawls atop him afterward; they let the red spread between their chests, pounding quietly, until Sherlock no longer is certain whose, between them, the heartbeat is.

..

damn character limits. hope it's more or less what you wanted, OP, and that the other anon gets you a much better and less raggedy fill. &hearts

Re: fill: anywhere i go you go (3b/3)

... Now singing "detachable hea~art" to the tune of "detachable penis". No. Bad Nin's mind. Shut up.

It isn't manipulation if you always give it back.
That's like the "it's not stealing, it's borrowing" line. No, Sherlock, it doesn't work that way. :|

"I fucking love you," Victor Trevor said ten days after they'd met
... See, I'd call that too fast, but John shot a man for Sherlock the day after he met him. Suddenly, my world view has shifted, oGod.

John said, "It's alright," and touched his cold nose to the warm side Sherlock's neck.
Asdflkjh. ♥ I am such a sucker for small touches like that. Do not get me started. It will not end well for anyone (if it ever ends).

I'm interested in how hearts and bodies work in this universe. I'm guessing that the chest (or at least the region where the heart is) is laid bare and open. Blood doesn't gush out through some type of mechanism that allows the heart to beat outside the body and still provide it with blood flow. Which makes CPR a lot easier, but also leaves hearts much more vulnerable. And man, having like 1/2-3/4 lb organ missing from your chest could probably mess with your balance too. Oman, what if someone did open heart surgery on two people and then accidentally switched the two? Would the patients notice? This is so complicated but fascinating! And I am totally overthinking this for fun! I can just handwave everything and explain it all by saying ~MAGIC~ Surprisingly a very versatile and useful explanation. :Db

I'm never going to get over you. After. When you leave.
Oh Sherlock, baby, don't think that. D:

As an adolescent, he picked chests as swiftly as he picked pockets.
That? Is a really cool image. In a "Bit Not Good" way cuz wow, all those hearts he stole. Literally. Heh.

he forces it back inside of John's ribcage, hard enough that it will stay.
Huh! He can do that? Fascinating. *Mimes Sherlock's thinking pose*

Sherlock finds himself straddled, saddled with a lapful of ex-army surgeon, sitting heavily atop his hips and thighs
Helloooo nurse doctor~ God, I love him taking the initiative in these matters, cuz Sherlock's too emotionally stunted to do it. I LOVE THE MAN, BUT SERIOUSLY.

"It's too big for me now," says John.
Oh. Oh.

And wow, the way they share the heart. I find it interesting how you straddle the line between literal and metaphorical usage of "heart", even though it's all literal in this fic. That's so cool, oman. And of course John's heart is big enough for two!

Suddenly reminded of this one poem by E. E. Cummings. More specifically, the first few lines:
i carry your heart with me(i carry it in
my heart)i am never without it(anywhere
i go you go,my dear;and whatever is done
by only me is your doing,my darling)


Re: fill: anywhere i go you go (3b/3)

(Anonymous)
This is gorgeous. Simply gorgeous.

Re: fill: anywhere i go you go (3b/3)

(Anonymous)
Oh this is beautiful. I love it.

Re: fill: anywhere i go you go (3b/3)

Good god, this fill was so beautiful in its own fascinating and weird way! Really well written in my opinion, it's not raggedy at all anon!

Stunning, quite stunning, I found it oddly chilling yet fascinating that at the end they share the heart by eating it, it was... I had goosebumps all over, it was strangely fascinating!

Loved it, absolutely! Great work! :D

Re: fill: anywhere i go you go (3b/3)

(Anonymous)
This is magic! John feeding him a bite with a kiss is especially magic.

OP <3 you so much! Re: fill: anywhere i go you go (3b/3)

(Anonymous)
That was, in no way, shape or form, raggedy. It was cool, edgy and warm and squeal-inducing.

I love the way you played it literal and metaphysical back and forth with the hearts- you could easily used personal objects or something else instead, and instead its, ungh, and then the shared eating/taking of the heart was so cool/awesome and yet scary-primitive! (Sorry, using too many slashes and hyphens.) And the line where John straddles Sherlock. For some damn reason the 'straddled, saddled' tickles me especially pink.

Aah, there's so much awesome in this fic! >flails happily< I'm gonna read it again and again, and be back to praise you some more if I'm not dead of squee for very long.


Re: fill: anywhere i go you go (3b/3)

♥ Beautiful

Re: fill: anywhere i go you go (3b/3)

Okay, this? This is magic, and you are a magician. This is why authors and bibliophiles wax poetic about the power of the written word.

I have what you might call a literary kink for this kind of surreal, reality-blurring fairy tale stuff (because it is a fairy tale, just look at it), but I think it's too blissfully weird for most people to take it on. But this is an absolutely prime specimen. It's beautiful, touching, oddball, and sweet with an edge of danger and sacrifice because no, they're actually literally sharing hearts. Sort of.

Feeding Sherlock his heart, kiss by kiss...guh. You have owned that metaphor, dear author. It's now yours. You have the copyright. Sue any bastard who tries to turn it back into a cliche.

Also, a lapful of ex-army surgeon sounds like an absolutely splendid thing to have. There's something so dear and domestically romantic about John dumping himself into Sherlock's lap in his worn jeans and threadbare t-shirt. "Hi." XD Absolutely charming. The whole thing was charming, and if it's raggedy then it's the enchanted sort of raggedy, in the way of velveteen rabbits, Doctors in blue boxes, and John wearing old blue jeans.

Re: fill: anywhere i go you go (3b/3)

Oh, wow. Gorgeous. Excellent, excellent work!

Re: fill: anywhere i go you go (3b/3)

Oh my gosh. There's something very, very magical about this.

Re: fill: anywhere i go you go (3b/3)

Oh God, I love this kind of insane fiction, and the last part killed me. So grotesque yet so beautiful. Fantastic story!

Re: fill: anywhere i go you go (1/3)

(Anonymous)
I love this already.

It isn't manipulation if you always give it back. Oh, Sherlock.

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